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name: story-angle-sharpener
description: "Diagnoses whether a draft has a genuine argument or just a topic, stress-tests the thesis and lede, evaluates the evidence base, and recommends whether to sharpen the existing frame or reframe the piece entirely — with a rewritten thesis, three alternative angles, and a prioritized revision plan. Use when a story reads as flat, unfocused, or forgettable and you need to find the sharper angle before another edit pass."
argument-hint: "[draft-or-summary] [publication-context]"
allowed-tools: ["Read"]
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# Story Angle Sharpener

## Purpose
Diagnose why a piece feels flat, unfocused, or forgettable — then determine whether it needs a sharper argument, a stronger evidence base, or a fundamentally different frame. Delivers a prompt-tested thesis, a rewritten lede, alternative angles, and a revision plan so the editor stops circling the draft and knows exactly what to fix.

## When to Use
Invoke this skill when the user asks to:
- Figure out why a draft feels flat, obvious, or "so what"
- Sharpen the angle, thesis, or argument of a story
- Test whether a lede is actually working
- Decide between reworking a piece and reframing it from scratch
- Find a fresher angle on a well-covered topic
- Strengthen a piece before sending it back to a writer for revision

## Inputs Required
Before starting, collect:
- **The draft or summary**: Full text, or the working thesis plus lede and section headers
- **Publication context**: Outlet or brand, section, and typical piece length
- **Target reader**: Who this is for and what they already know about the topic
- **Intended takeaway**: The one thing the writer wants the reader to walk away believing or doing
- **Coverage landscape**: What else has been published on this topic recently, if known
- **Editorial goal**: Traffic, authority-building, newsletter engagement, thought leadership, or SEO
- **Constraints**: Deadline pressure, sources locked in, or angles that are off-limits

If coverage landscape or editorial goal is missing, assume authority-building for an informed reader and note the assumption.

## Instructions

### Step 1: Thesis vs. Topic Test
Determine whether the piece has an argument or just a subject.
- Extract the implied thesis in one sentence. If you can't, that's the diagnosis — the piece is a topic, not a story.
- Apply the **contestability test**: Could a smart, informed person disagree with this thesis? If no one could disagree, it's a truism, not an argument.
- Apply the **so-what test**: If a reader accepted the thesis completely, what would change for them? If nothing, the stakes are missing.
- Label the result: **Genuine argument** / **Topic disguised as argument** / **Truism** / **Buried argument** (a real thesis exists but is hidden in paragraph 6).

### Step 2: Lede Stress-Test
Judge the opening on whether it earns the second paragraph.
- Identify the lede type: anecdotal, data-driven, contrarian, scene-setting, question, or summary.
- **The scroll test**: Does the first sentence give a reader a reason to keep reading, or does it warm up? Flag any throat-clearing before the actual entry point.
- **The specificity check**: Does the lede open on something concrete (a person, a number, a moment, a claim) or on abstraction?
- **Thesis-lede alignment**: Does the lede point toward the argument, or toward a different piece? Misalignment is the most common invisible defect.
- Rate the lede: **Publishable / Fixable / Rebuild** with one sentence explaining why.

### Step 3: Evidence Base Audit
Evaluate whether the argument is actually supported.
- Map the load-bearing claims — the 2–4 assertions the whole piece rests on.
- For each, note the evidence type present: primary reporting, data, expert source, example/anecdote, or assertion-only.
- Flag **assertion-only claims** carrying argumentative weight — these are the piece's structural risks.
- Assess **evidence-to-claim proportion**: Is the boldest claim backed by the weakest evidence? That inversion kills credibility.
- Identify one piece of evidence that, if added, would most strengthen the argument.

### Step 4: The Reframe Decision
Decide whether to sharpen or reframe — the core judgment call.
- **Sharpen** when the argument is sound but underpowered: the thesis is real, evidence exists, the frame is right, but execution is soft. Fixable in a revision pass.
- **Reframe** when the fundamental angle is wrong: the piece is well-executed against the wrong question, covers what's already saturated, or buries a more interesting story inside a duller one.
- State the decision explicitly and give the single reason. Do not hedge between the two.

### Step 5: Deliver the Sharpened Angle
Produce the concrete outputs the editor can act on.
1. **Rewritten thesis**: One sentence — contestable, specific, with visible stakes.
2. **Rewritten lede**: A 2–4 sentence opening that passes the scroll and specificity tests.
3. **Three alternative angles**: Distinct frames on the same material, each with a one-line thesis and who it's for. At least one should be the "hidden better story" if it exists.
4. **Prioritized revision plan**: 4–6 ordered actions, highest-leverage first, each specific enough to hand to a writer.

## Output Format
- **Structure**: Five diagnostic sections followed by the deliverables block
- **Length**: 800–1,100 words
- **Format**: Structured document — diagnostic labels and ratings up top, revision plan as a numbered list
- **Sections**: Thesis vs. Topic → Lede Stress-Test → Evidence Base → Reframe Decision → Sharpened Angle (rewritten thesis, rewritten lede, three alternatives, revision plan)
- **Tone**: Senior editor in a line-edit conversation — direct, specific, unsentimental about the draft but constructive about the fix

## Quality Checklist
Before delivering output, verify:
- [ ] The implied thesis is extracted as a single sentence (or its absence is named as the diagnosis)
- [ ] The lede receives an explicit rating: Publishable / Fixable / Rebuild
- [ ] The evidence audit names specific load-bearing claims and flags any assertion-only ones
- [ ] The reframe decision is stated as a clear Sharpen-or-Reframe call — not both
- [ ] The rewritten thesis passes the contestability and so-what tests
- [ ] Exactly three alternative angles are provided, each with a one-line thesis and target reader

## Notes
- The most common finding is "topic disguised as argument" — a competent, readable piece that never commits to a claim. Naming it plainly is the highest-value move.
- When you flag a buried argument in Step 1, the "hidden better story" alternative angle in Step 5 should usually surface it.
- Resist inventing evidence in the rewritten lede — if the strongest opening requires reporting that isn't in the draft, flag it as a reporting task in the revision plan rather than fabricating a detail.
- Reframe decisions are expensive for writers under deadline; when the constraint is a tight deadline, bias toward Sharpen unless the frame is genuinely broken.

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## How to use this skill

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